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Monthly Report....Tunza Eco-Generation..abdullah Khalid |
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by Abdullah khalid | 03-09-2022 16:00 0 |
MONTHLY REPORT: Tunza Eco- Generation Though I was not enough mature that time but can still remember the catastrophic floods that badly hit our village in 2010. Those uneven climatic conditions and their disastrous effects in our regions made me curious to study these environmental evolutions and aligned me to aim on getting my people and society out of these calamities. As we all know that temperature of the planet Earth is increasing mainly due to our irresponsible behavior, so an urgent work needs to be done in this regard. We have all kind of laws both at national and international level but what our focal point should be is to implement them. The disastrous effects of Global Warming are becoming clearer by every passing day. This year again (2022), Pakistan us again facing catastrophic floods after a decade break. I suggest the world leaders should sincerely give attention to this side as only a stable environment will lead to a stable economy and ultimately a prosperous nation |
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Hi, Abdullah Khalid!
This is your mentor, Yoon.
I am very sorry about the catastrophic floods in your hometown in 2010.
Global warming caused a disastrous flood in my hometown this year.
I agree that implementing laws is more important than creating them, especially laws related to environmental issues.
In addition to Minkyung's comment, I believe the report would be better if it provided a clear direction for world leaders.
The environmental issues are complex. There is no one solution that can solve all the problems. What is more, there is more than one solution to a problem.
Therefore, the report would be better if it targeted a specific problem and convinced leaders to implement detailed actions to resolve the issue.
Though nice work in writing your first monthly report! I am very impressed with how you did well in organizing the article.
I am looking forward to see your next report!
Posted 20-09-2022 17:53
Hello!
This is your mentor, Minkyung.
I can see that you thought about your local environmental issues and expanded them to a global level! I agree that laws shouldn't be just about enactment - enforcement should definitely come along.
However, just to give a piece of advice, I think your report will be much more interesting and informative if you could give an example of a law related to the topic.
Thank you for the interesting report, and keep up the work!
Posted 14-09-2022 11:43
MONTHLY REPORT: Tunza Eco- Generation
Though I was not enough mature that time but can still remember the catastrophic floods that badly hit our village in 2010. Those uneven climatic conditions and their disastrous effects in our regions made me curious to study these environmental evolutions and aligned me to aim on getting my people and society out of these calamities. As we all know that temperature of the planet Earth is increasing mainly due to our irresponsible behavior, so an urgent work needs to be done in this regard. We have all kind of laws both at national and international level but what our focal point should be is to implement them. The disastrous effects of Global Warming are becoming clearer by every passing day. This year again (2022), Pakistan us again facing catastrophic floods after a decade break. I suggest the world leaders should sincerely give attention to this side as only a stable environment will lead to a stable economy and ultimately a prosperous nation
Posted 03-09-2022 16:00