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Monthly Thematic Report October - Energy |
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by Sagar Koirala | 20-10-2022 22:36 0 |
October commences National Clean Energy Action Month, a celebratory time in which every government is "Leading by Example" by providing leadership in energy management and building optimization, energy resilience and security, and using advanced and distributed energy technologies. In this time of global market uncertainty one thing we do know is that the world needs energy - and in increasing quantities - to support economic and social progress and build a better quality of life, in particular in developing countries. But providing this energy around the globe comes with a responsibility and commitment to developing and using our resources responsibly. We are committed to protecting people and the environment and making positive economic contributions. For developing nations, the need for reliable and affordable energy is more fundamental. It can improve and even save lives. In these countries, reliable power supports expanded industry, modern agriculture, increased trade, and improved transportation. These are the building blocks that help people escape poverty and create better lives. Plan to effort; And look for review.
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Hi, Sagar Koirala!
This is your mentor, Yoon.
You did well in listing global efforts. However, the expressions are too general and hard to follow.
Your report would be strengthened if you provided reliable sources to support your points.
Great job on writing the thematic report.
I am looking forward to reading your following report!
Posted 21-10-2022 20:38
Hello, this is your mentor Minkyung.
Thank you for sharing measures to secure and use energy sources. I would recommend elaborating more on the points that you made - they seem too vague, and it is quite hard for readers to understand what they actually mean.
Great job writing this month's report, and keep up the work!
Posted 21-10-2022 10:41