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If I were a Friend with eternity; Lost in Nature! |
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by Momina Ahsan | 15-04-2023 07:32 0 |
Earthly heaven makes the fellas bloom and blossom daily, with laughter around the garden of roses. Cool breeze making the souls soothe up their drab routine. If I were a friend of eternity, butterflies would fly all over, with the shadowy shyness and the brimming colors leading to creativity. End of lies, the spread of melody of love, peace, and harmony music - with the sprinkling of beauty in the souls, without discrimination, there would be a flow of peace. If I were a friend of eternity, tears would fade like a blow-splashing fragrance all over Globe!
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Hello Momina! This is your mentor Yewon.
I apologize for the late comment.
You have written a lovely poem regarding nature!
I think this poem makes us think again about the importance of protecting nature.
Thank you for your writing! Great job!
Posted 08-08-2023 13:17
Thank you so much!
It means a lot, and yes! Your piece is a craft making us ponder!
Posted 10-05-2023 04:14
Hello Momina! This is your mentor James.
What a beautiful piece of art! Let me comment to your poem with one of my own!
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Earth WAS green
Do what you must do!
Thanks again for this lovely writing!
Posted 05-05-2023 23:29