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Hey human you are hurting me ! |
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by Deepak Subedi | 31-01-2019 04:33
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Earth have something to tell us ! Hey Human ! Most beautiful and intelligent creatures I made you so that you can bring peace and harmony in earth But I was wrong Yes I was wrong You are hurting me, you are killing me You are killing your mother I made you to save other But you are saving yourself by killing other I made you to rule this earth but you are ruining it Hey Human you are hurting me Air - Polluted Land - Polluted Water - Polluted Every thing is polluted and you are also polluted You were learning learning and learning I was very happy, I saw your every activity I saw how you struggle, I saw how you evolve I am happy with your success But My human you are hurting me I am your mother, but you are hurting me Toxic Toxic & Toxic Why ??? EverythingToxic ??? Plastic ! Why ???? I can't digest it Ozone gases ??? I can't tolerate more Deforestation ??? When will you stop ??? Carbon emissions !!!! :( Hey Human Yes yes you are truly hurting me Hey Human you are hurting me I have lots of children, you are one of them You are killing your brother and sisters You are so selfish that you forgot I can vanish you Climate Change Yes, my human Climate Change It's your fault to tease me, You are changing me I am changing climate and climate will change you again !!!! Can you evolve again with changed climate ? You still have time !! Rethink But you know You are hurting me Picture Credit: Harmanjot Kaur
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16 Comments
Greetings Deepak
I hope you are doing well!
Thank you so much for this report!
Keep writing
Green cheers
Regards
Hema
Posted 22-03-2020 11:00
Greetings deepak
I hope you are doing well
Thank you so much for this report.
I hope to read more from you.
Keep up with great works
Green cheers
Regards
Basanta
Posted 16-03-2020 04:12
Hello
Joon Ho Mentor
Yes mentor, we all are responsible for this condition of earth,
Thank you so much :)
Posted 06-02-2019 00:51
Hello Gyeongrin mentor
Yes Mentor I tried to show how we damge our earth,
Thank you so much :)
Posted 06-02-2019 00:49
Hello Deepak, though our planet is not something alive, it will definitely blame us for our irresponsible activities without thought and specific plans.
Thanks for your report, it deeply remains in my mind to look back how responsible I have been so far for our community, my nation and planet.
Posted 02-02-2019 21:20
Hello Deepak
Every single written words show how much we have degraded our environment and make us look back at what we've done.
This is truly a beautiful piece of art.
Thanks for sharing :)
Posted 02-02-2019 19:02
Yes
Kushal Naharki you are absolutely correct,
Thank you for your comment :)
Posted 01-02-2019 12:11
In fact, Its us human who are degrading and polluting the planet and its significant consequences have been felt by all in the planet. Our activities are damaging the beautiful habitat of fishes with plastic, killing innocent wild lives through poaching and destroying forest, polluting the air we and all living beings breathe.
We can bring the change is we make people realize about the impacts they have been causing and start the initiatives from us as its a small acts that can bring huge impacts.
Thank you for such a beautiful poem Deepak Brother,
Wishing you read much more interesting reports from you.
Green Cheers from your brother Kushal :) :)
Posted 31-01-2019 20:53
Hello Asmita
Yes it is realistic and we must take action
Thank you :)
Posted 31-01-2019 14:36
Hello Sachin
I tried to write something about nature and it ended like this :)
Posted 31-01-2019 14:35
Hello Dibya
Thank you :)
Posted 31-01-2019 14:35
Hello Faith Cherotich
Yes we have to take action otherwise climate change will destroy us in near future,
You are welcome :)
Posted 31-01-2019 14:34
Bitter reality_Beautifully expressed...
Posted 31-01-2019 14:31
Beautiful piece of writing :) :)
Posted 31-01-2019 14:14
wow!! wonderful piece of art!! :)
Posted 31-01-2019 12:56
Earth has a message for us and we humans have to realize that it is time we take it seriously. Purpose to be kind to our planet and it will be kind to you. Thank you for this poem and sharing the voice of Earth!
Posted 31-01-2019 05:16